Welcome Guest Blogger Leslie Wainger, Book Doctor!

Where to begin? I guess a few words on my background would be good, yes? I’ve been an in-house editor for almost 30 years, first for Silhouette Books and then for Harlequin Books, when they acquired the Silhouette imprint. I’m currently editor-at-large for Harlequin’s single title division, handling around 15 authors, some so new we haven’t put out their first books yet and some well-known names who are regulars on the New York Times and other bestseller lists. On the side I’m a freelance book doctor (more on that in a minute), and a few years ago I wrote Writing a Romance Novel for Dummies, which is very much a guide to writing good popular fiction, not just romance. I’ve got a copy of that to sign and give away today to some random registered poster, so there’s an incentive if I ever heard one. *g*

And hey, if you’ve already got a copy, it makes a nice gift for a writer friend. For fun I volunteer at the Bronx Zoo, and I love to travel. On the 28th of October, I got back from two weeks in Madagascar, 3500 photos (thank heavens for digital) in tow, the vast majority of lemurs. But enough about me. What can I (or any book doctor) do for you?

I’m here to help you make your book better. It’s as simple as that. My starting point is always an analysis, whether of a partial or the complete, and in that analysis I focus mainly on what needs to be fixed, because frankly, there’s no point in you paying me good money to compliment you. Not that I won’t mention your strengths as well, because I will, it’s just that it’s through fixing flaws that a book gets better. From that point, I can certainly offer other services, mainly line editing, but for most authors, it’s the analysis they want and need.

One big misconception is that only unpublished authors can benefit from a book doctor’s services. Certainly they can and do, but I’ve also worked with a number of published authors looking to switch genres or get back into the business after time away (whether voluntarily or otherwise), and I also offer my services to agents looking to have an author fine tune a project that has potential but hasn’t yet sold. I’m also happy to work with an author to tweak a query letter, whether to an agent or a publisher, so a book goes out with it’s best foot page forward.

Some practicalities:

No book doctor can guarantee that your book will be published after they finish working their magic, so steer clear of anyone who makes that or any equally outrageous claim.

51QBNANMR4L__SS500_.jpg Be sure you go to a book doctor who 1) has credentials (other than “I like books and reading and used to write for my college paper”), and 2) has credentials that are relevant to what you’re writing. As an editor, I’m a fiction specialist, pretty much all kinds of fiction. I’m not an academic, and I’m not well-versed in non-fiction, especially of the how-to/self-help variety that’s always hot. Most book doctors out there have a background that’s specific in some way, so check out what they’ve done in the past before deciding if they’re the right medic for your MS.

I charge on a per-project basis for an analysis, with my fee based on book length. (You can see more information on this and on everything else relevant about me on my site, but please note that my rate schedule will be changing as of January 1st.) Some book doctors charge by the hour, but anyone who does ought to be able to give you a ballpark total up front based on the length of your project. And I, like everyone else I’ve seen, require payment up front.

Most of all, if you have questions – on turnaround time, on the appropriateness of a project for my skills, specific questions you’re looking to have answered about your book, whatever – ask them.

Book doctors sometimes get a bad rap, and no doubt there are some out there who claim more expertise than they in fact have, but speaking for myself, I see this as a natural complement to my in-house job, and one that uses the same skills I’ve honed over nearly 30 years of finding and developing and publishing authors whose careers have been as long as mine and who continue to publish successfully, a number of whom are household names besides. I think I’m a good resource to have in your pocket, and today I’m here to answer questions and show you what a good book doctor can do.

Welcome Leslie!

I'll get in here early, and say welcome and we're so excited to have you by today. :)

I always wondered what a Book Doctor was, and I never really knew until my agent, Natasha Kern, recommended I find someone to work with to help me with a transition to single title/paranormal (which is sort of a double transition, really). I was apprehensive, as I think there's a mindset in creative writing that paying for anything in the way of writing help is somehow bad, but you know, bollocks to that! (as Spike would say!)Sort of a "rugged individualism" mindset, I guess.

What I've really learned is that we invest in our writing in many different ways -- time, energy, creativity and financially -- we'll pay for conferences, advertisements, memberships, and yet we might balk at paying for editing, when it can be the best thing we ever put our hard-earned money toward. And frankly, compared to what a conference or magazine ad costs, you are a good deal. ;>

But getting the help you need when you need it, to learn, to grow, and to advance your career, is what I think really counts. I know you've been instrumental in helping me get past several blocks I had in learning how to make a transition from category to single title, and that was with just one session and some email conversations. Writing is so solitary, and even with critique partners, there is just no one who can give you feedback like a professional editor, and it's been a huge weight off my mind with my new book -- it might not sell, who knows? There are no guarantees in this biz, that's for sure, but I know I've done everything I can to make it as good as I can.

So, thanks -- and this is my wake-up call to writers who might balk at paying for editing! But as Leslie points out, make sure you're working with someone qualified to take you where you want to go...

Sam

Hi, Sam. What can I say but

Hi, Sam. What can I say but "thank you"? And maybe offer you a position as my PR and marketing manager, LOL!

Seriously, I think you've hit the nail on the head, and I hope more authors - especially published authors - will be as open-minded as you are and see that a good book doctor is a valuable resource.

Thanks again. :-)

Leslie

No, no, thank *you* [G]

Seriously, writing is so hard, and I've spent about 20 years learning about it, and it just gets harder, LOL.

I have a Masters in English, and I'm even a freelance editor myself (did you know that?) but I work for technical trade magazines, and what I do is more journalism oriented, and very technical.

I taught writing, including technical writing, for 12 years at the university level. . .and what all that has taught me is that writing is just so complex that we all need to learn when confronted with something new, and also, learning to write completely by yourself, while possible, is neither easy nor pleasant. So I think having a background as a writer in various ways has shown me that seeking out experts to help is nothing to be ashamed of, in fact, it's necessary.

Sam

I didn't know you were an

I didn't know you were an editor, too! I think I get to work on more enjoyable stuff, though. :-)

Leslie

Yeah, I think you're right,

Yeah, I think you're right, except the pieces I get are only about 7-10 pages, LOL. ;)

Sam

Interesting post

Thanks for an informative post. I am not a writer but it's interesting to read about how your job helps both published and unpublished-as-yet authors produce the best possible book. That's what we readers are looking for: a well-written, entertaining story.

Hi Cheryl-- The truth is,

Hi Cheryl--

The truth is, that's what editors are looking for, too. We all got into this business because we love to read, so whether I'm editing or book doctoring, my goal is exactly the same as yours, just at an earlier stage of the process. :-)

Leslie

Welcome Leslie!

Nice to see you here!

Ad I want to ditto all you said. So many people go with people who have no experience at all, or hold out promises they can't keep, and it's such a shame. Checking credentials, and only hiring someone who is an expert in their area is critical.

And I love your book, BTW. It's something I recommend often to my writing students!

Shirley

New York Times and USA Today Bestselling Author
Coming this fall: MIRACLE ON CHRISTMAS EVE (Harlequin Romance) and REALLY SOMETHING another Hot Romantic Comedy from Zebra Books
www.shirleyjump.com or read “Eating my Words”

Hi Shirley-- Thank you. :-)

Hi Shirley--

Thank you. :-) It's always wonderful to hear that someone's found the book useful, and recommending it is an extra plus. Thank you again.

Leslie

Popping In To Say Hello

Leslie,
I doubt you even remember me, but you were the first editor I ever met---at the RWA conference in Minneapolis. I was green and scared to death, but you were so calm and professional. You'd read something I'd sent to an agent and though I didn't sell that book to you, I have always said you gave me valuable information that I used to sell my next project to Harlequin Romance line. And I love your Romance For Dummies book---have recommended it to a lot of new writers. It's easy to see you are a true book lover.
Roz

Hi Roz-- I'm just saying

Hi Roz--

I'm just saying thank-you all over the place today. It's so great to know I've made a difference to so many talented people over the years. And though I confess I don't recall that first meeting, I certainly know who you are from more recent times, so...thank you again. :-)

Leslie

Connecting

Hi Leslie,
Good to "see" you here. (3500 pictures from Madagascar??? Gasp!) I haven't had the benefit of your analysis yet, but I'm so looking forward to receiving it and getting deeper into my work. I'm "between publishers and between agents" which is to say it's been awhile since I've had a new book out.
Getting honest constructive feedback is very difficult, as far as I'm concerned. I live in an isolated area with no near writing groups. Even so, in the past I've seen negative results for writers in some critique groups, so even if a group like that existed here, I doubt I'd join. Send me a raft, I'm feeling adrift here! Thanks for appearing on the horizon here today! Garda

Hi Garda-- Thanks for your

Hi Garda--

Thanks for your kind words. I'm looking forward to reading your project - and it should be soon, too. :-) With luck I'll be able to give you the kind of feedback to end your between-times, because I know how frustrating your situation can be.

Leslie

Hi Leslie! It's wonderful

Hi Leslie! It's wonderful to see you here today. I think I bought your book the same day it came out, and have to say it's been a great resource! I distinctly recall being on business travel and reading it on the flight, and there were parts that just made me laugh out loud.

I would agree that, based on what you've said, a book doctor could be invaluable to a published writer. I'm halfway through a manuscript that's due to my editor in ten weeks; if I send it to you, can you tell me how to finish it?? Okay, just kidding.

I do, however, have a manuscript that did really well on the contest circuit before I was published, but despite garnering interest from a number of editors, just can't seem to find a home. I'd say it's a perfect candidate for a book doctor; it needs a practiced eye to identify the weak areas. It's just a matter of getting up my courage to do it. I'm always convinced that whatever I write is just horrible!

Thank you so much for being here today, and I really hope I can send you something in the near future!

Karen Foley

Hi Karen-- I hope you

Hi Karen--

I hope you weren't drinking your free coffee when I made you laugh. *g* And I hope you'll get your courage up, because sometimes all it takes is an objective eye to make what looked really intimidating suddenly seem possible.

Leslie

PS - I think lots of us are unreasonably hard on ourselves. I look at all those Madagascar pictures I mentioned and see flaws everywhere, but other people rave about them.

Hi everyone! Leslie, one bit

Hi everyone!

Leslie, one bit in your post really spoke to me. My day job is also in publishing, but I am hired by the presses, not the individual authors. I don't recruit authors for clients largely because of the idea that some have that "now I've HIRED an editor, of course I'll get published." I think you've made it very clear what the service is: more like "now that I've hired a book doctor, I'll see what more work to do on my book."

I have two questions for you.

1. When you do a project with someone, do you just read that one version, or do you look at someone's rewrites? (In other words, have they been able to address any of the problems?)

2. Do you find there are certain problems that are difficult to solve--perhaps the analysis is "bail out of this baby and start from scratch"? Or is it entirely dependent on the author--one person might have to get, say, the emotional responses down on paper first while another can rip out action and has to deal with other features later.

Thanks for all your advice!

Hi Ann-- Yay! Questions! And

Hi Ann--

Yay! Questions! And with useful numbers, to make answering easier.

1) It's up to the author whether they want me to look at a rewrite or not. Some do and some don't. That does cost extra, though. The initial analysis is a finite thing.

2) I've never flat-out told someone to table something, but I'm always honest, so in some cases my analysis makes it clear that starting pretty much from scratch is the only way to bring out the best in an idea, and truthfully, not every author is going to have the ability to do that. Most times, though, there's a mix of strengths and weaknesses in a project that may mean a major rewrite but not necessarily a "Start from p. 1" one.

Hope that helps.

Leslie

Thanks for the clarification

Thanks for the clarification about book doctors. Yes, I've seen a few shady/unqualified ones out there. I'm saving your website link in case I need it when I finish my manuscript. Thanks!

Hi Michelle-- I'll look

Hi Michelle--

I'll look forward to hearing from you when the time comes. :-) Until then, happy writing!

Leslie

Leslie

Hi Everyone:
Thank you to the ladies of LIEC for having so many great guest bloggers.

Leslie:
I've always wanted to sit and chat with you, and did. It was several years ago you when you attended the NEC conference as an editor. Saturday night after conference you visited us in the conference suite. We shared stories, laughs and cold pizza and card readings. I was the coordinator of that conference. After chatting with you I can honestly say I wasn't as terrified of editors, but still have a healthy respect for everything they do.

I just wanted to ask you what the difference is between a book coach and a book doctor is?

I actually look forward to getting your book and reading it. Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to answer questions.

Hi Michelle-- I remember

Hi Michelle--

I remember that conference. It was a lot of fun. And I'm glad I was able to "humanize" editors for you. *g*

As for your question... I really don't know the answer. I'm thinking maybe a book coach works one on one on an ongoing basis, but I'm just guessing about that, to tell you the truth. Sorry.

Leslie

I remember

Here's another question.

Say for instance you final in contests, you win a few, you submit to editors, but still it's just not the right book at the right time. What do you suggest to writers on the cusp? Would the services of a word doctor, such as yourself, be useful in that situation?

Michelle

Hi again, Michelle-- Yes,

Hi again, Michelle--

Yes, that's a good time for someone to consult a book doctor, because clearly the book/author is close, so an objective eye can be very helpful in fine-tuning things, and that fine tuning can make the difference.

Leslie

writing coach vs. book doctor

Leslie, there's another title some people use, writing coach. I'm thinking that's someone who rah-rah's from the side saying, "get those page numbers up!", "you call that a writing session? 10 words??", "you'd better go back and brush up on your high school grammar quizzes!" That sort of thing. So is "writing coach" a more general kind of work with a writer as opposed to more focused work on one manuscript, which I would think would in part describe the role of a book doctor?
Garda

writing coach vs. book doctor

Thank you Garda.

Garda, I suspect you've

Garda, I suspect you've nailed it. Thank you. :-)

Leslie

Hi Leslie!

Thanks for taking the time to explain what you do and the benefits of a book doctor. I know I often considered it before I published, but will certainly consider it again when/if the time is right.

Kay

Kay Stockham
Montana Skies, Harlequin Superromance, Jan '07
His Perfect Woman, Harlequin Superromance, June 2007
Untitled (Jack Brody's Story), Harlequin Superromance, November 2007
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Leap From Category To Mainstream

Hi Leslie,

Thanks for sharing your time and expertise with us today!

I hadn't seriously considered using a book doctor until Sam told me about her experience. Now, I'm furiously crunching budget numbers to see if I can afford it. LOL.

I do have a couple of questions. 1) Do you give career advice, too, or just strictly manuscript related suggestions? 2) Are there any common challenges you see with category authors trying to write mainstream stories?

Carrie

Hi Carrie-- Sorry I missed

Hi Carrie--

Sorry I missed you there for a minute. ::makes apologetic face::

And thanks for asking questions so I can earn my keep. :-)

1) My advice is mainly project-related, but I sometimes extrapolate a bit, ie: I'll say if something feels more category or mainstream if I think the author is setting herself up for disappointment by aiming in the wrong place, or more romance vs. mystery or whatever. And why, of course. Or I'll explain how to take a book in either direction if it's right on the line. So what I saw starts with the MS but sometimes takes things further.

2) I think the biggest hurdle is voice, particularly in moving from category to something non-romance or where romance plays a much smaller role. Most mainstream tends to have a tauter writing style, and romance authors often have a hard time with that, because they come from a genre where emotion plays such a strong part.

Hope that helps. :-)

Leslie

Thanks, Leslie!

Yes, Leslie, it does help! Thank you! 8-)
Carrie

Thanks, Kay. :-) (Though

Thanks, Kay. :-) (Though truthfully, I hope things go smoothly for you and you never need the help.)

Leslie

agents and/or editors

Leslie -- wanna go there? Do you, once you've worked with an author, recommend to the author agents or editors you think may be open to looking at the work? Or do you strictly work on the book at hand and end the partnership there? Thanks for spending time here today! Garda

Hi again, Garda. Every

Hi again, Garda. Every project's different, but if I saw a book I felt was ready for submission, I would certainly say so and might, depending on specifics (if any agents I know are looking for that type of project or wharever), make a recommendation of an agent or house.

Leslie

Hello

Hello, I am new to this site, thanks to Sam directing from the NaNo board :)
I have your book as well, Leslie, and have found it useful. I will also tell you that I had purchased several books and through looking at recommendations at Amazon yours was most highly recommended.
I look forward to reading your 'advice' here. I was not really familiar with what a book doctor was either, until today.
Maureen

Hi Maureen-- I'm glad the

Hi Maureen--

I'm glad the book has been useful for you - and that my reviews are good. (I've always been kind of scared to look. *g*)

Leslie

Hi Leslie!

I saw the notice on eharl's NANO's thread, as well! Thanks for the tip, Sam.
I love your book. Thanks for putting all your tips on paper, and for being here today.

Carol Hutchens

Hi Carol-- It's my pleasure

Hi Carol--

It's my pleasure to be here, and thanks for the compliment. It's good to know word of my blogging has spread. :-)

Leslie

Questions!

Hi Leslie,

Thanks for this informative session. I'm fascinated.

I have a few questions...

1. Would you be able to give us an example of what your feedback looks like? I saw on your website that it looks as if you do everything from pointing out issues to offering suggestions. I'm wondering what the feedback looks like--notes on the page and an analysis? Do you look at each manuscript using a standard set of criteria and then add individual notes or is each one different?

2. What are some of the easy and/or common fixes people can make for high impact? I love a book with good dialogue, that seems pretty important? (Does this sound like those "sell your house" shows on TV--for instant curb appeal, spruce up your dialogue with a coat of cheerful paint...)

Thanks a million! This is such an interesting topic. I had a friend who hired a freelance editor when she sold her first book. We both learned a lot from the notes on that project. Some things are so obvious once you know them, but if you don't know them...

Cheers,
Ellen

Hi Ellen-- And another yay!

Hi Ellen--

And another yay! for more questions. :-)

1) I can't show an actual example, but I can say that I don't have any kind of a check-off form. Each author gets an individual analysis, and I'd say the average length is 4 single-spaced pages. I mention strengths but focus mainly on weaknesses/potential fixes/guidance, then do a brief recap at the end to hit the main points all in one place.

2) As far as "usual" fixes/suggestions go, I've seen a whole range. I'd say the most common, though, is a matter of focus. A lot of the projects I've seen have gone off on tangents or structured things so that the main thread of the story ends up lost or at least blurred, so I offer advice for getting the focus back where it belongs. The specifics of that vary from book to book, of course.

And that - for any- and everyone who's reading this answer - is key to what I do: I give detailed and totally project-specific feedback, the sort of feedback everyone wants from an editor but that editors simply don't have the time to give, except on specific projects they feel are already close to what they're looking for.

Hope that helps.

Leslie

Hi Leslie, Thanks for the

Hi Leslie,

Thanks for the answers!

Is it bad to admit that I feel a physical pang (lust?) at the thought of four single-spaced pages of feedback? This must be how some people feel when they look at shoes or truffles.

Really interesting stuff. The project-specific focus makes such good sense. Some things can be carried over as general habits, but the meat of a book is in the specifics of character, plot, tension, etc.

Thanks again,
Ellen

Don't give up on those

Don't give up on those truffles, LOL! (Seriously, I feel very complimented, Ellen. Thank you.)

Leslie

High Concept

OK, I promise to stop the barrage of comments and questions AFTER I ask this, Leslie:
What is your "concept" of "high concept" and what do editors really mean by that term? Is it over-used? Can there be too many high concept projects? I knew of some writers a few years back who spent months on coming up with a "high concept log line" for the top of their ms just to hook an editor. They didn't. So was it that their definition of "high concept" didn't mesh with the editors they submitted to? (To whom they submitted -- gee, writing to an editor makes me all too aware of ending with prepositions, etc.!) Thanks yet again. Garda

Hi Garda-- The

Hi Garda--

The highest-concept pitch I know is the one Michael Mann gave for Miami Vice: MTV cops. The truth is, I think the word "high" is what confuses people. What an editor's really looking for in that quickie description is a topline indication of why the book is special and/or what makes it marketable. Think of it as the 2-line TV Guide description if your book got made into a movie of the week. What would they say to make people watch?

Helpful?

Leslie

Definitely Helpful

Thank you very much, Leslie. Your responses have been very informative -- the questions from everyone here are great and provoke your detailed responses. Thanks so much for being here. Garda

Leslie, In your reference

Leslie,

In your reference book "Writing a Romance Novel for Dummies" you indicate that lousy writing is the single most common reason why a book is rejected. It's my absolute favorite line in the book. As a former corporate learning development manager I often struggled with helping individuals recognize their strengths as well opportunities for development. In some cases desire and dedication were never going to help an employee achieve a goal that extended far beyond their skill set.

This brings me to my question. As a new writer I have received both positive and constructive feedback on my work. Would a qualified book doctor be frank enough to say your ambition exceeds your talent? I think many non published writers crave honest, realistic input on whether they have the foundation to make it in a very competitive industry.

Regards,

Rita

Hi Rita-- Thanks for coming

Hi Rita--

Thanks for coming by. :-) As to your question, I don't think I'd ever tell someone to simply stop writing, and of course I couch my feedback as kindly and positively as I can, but I am honest, and I'll definitely tell someone if I think a book needs a total rewrite, for whatever reason, and then present the points that need work. After that, it's really up to the author as to whether to keep at it - with that book or in general - or if the task is just too daunting, something s/he doesn't feel up to handling.

Hope that helps.

Leslie

Thank you Leslie! I think

Thank you Leslie! I think I'll tell my husband I want a 'book doctor' for Christmas. (That would definitely catch his attention).

Regards,
Rita

LOL! Actually, though, my

LOL! Actually, though, my first "patient" was given my services (oh dear, that sounds bad, doesn't it?) as a Christmas gift last year.

Leslie

Analysis as a Learning Tool

Hi, Leslie. Great to have you here today. I read your post carefully and so glad that you stressed the book doctor needs qualifications, specific ones to the piece/needs. I visited your website and compared those rates to a book doctor who recently spoke to a local group. His fees were 5k, but lasted a while, can't remember the specs, but do remember the 5k.
I've read the present comments here, and if this one is here, I've missed it: When an editor or Leslie (as the book doctor or both) makes an analysis and comments on one piece, those comments are learning tools for future books. Study them well. One of the best things a published author can do for others who are learning (and you never stop learning) is to pass around the MS with editorial and copy editor comments to be used as a learning tool. Published or not, there are skills to learn or relearn. Very nice, value-worth-it offering, Leslie.

Cait London

Hi Cait-- Great to see you!

Hi Cait--

Great to see you! And you're absolutely right. Any feedback from an editor, agent, etc. has ramifications beyond the specific project, and a smart author will keep that feedback in mind for future projects, too.

Take care. :-)

Leslie