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What's hot and what's not (and how do you tell?)

It's one of the mysteries of the romance genre that we're always arguing among ourselves what a hot romance is, what an erotic romance is, and all points between (if there are any). Agents and editors and marketing departments seem to know, or to know it when they see it.

fshores.jpg I love being part of the long and subversive tradition of romance, of dangerous books for women. What would happen to society if virtuous wives who should be up to their elbows in bread dough or yearly children lounged around, stays loosened, shoes off, reading books about love? Shocking! These were books, moreover, that were meant to be read alone, in the bedchamber or boudoir; books that stimulated the imagination and the senses...well, just about anything could happen.

(And I hope when you read my books it will!)

Is it only explicit sex that makes a hot book hot? Once you've got over the shock value of real body part names, or their slang terms, try substituting quite innocent words in their place and see if it's as sexy.

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His journal got even harder as her sandwich dripped with urgent desire. "Paint me," she panted.

Was it good for you?

Nope, didn't think so.

I have the distinction of having written a book "that doesn't have any sex in it," as I've heard it described. That is, The Rules of Gentility has no explicit sex and by and large the hero/heroine keep their clothes on. Yet I think it's one of the sexiest things I've written--and it's all because of the intense awareness between hero and heroine. It’s just as sexy in its way as Forbidden Shores , my erotic historical romance where hero and heroine do everything with everyone.

What do you think? What makes a hot book hot?

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Morning!

First off,I love your covers, Janet. I'm a bit of a cover whore (as my CP calls me) and yours are rather beautiful. :)

And onto the topic...I honestly do not think I've read a book without sex that I thought was "hot". I tend to lean more towards the graphic stories, though I do enjoy non-sex or closed door stories, too. It's not the actual sex that makes a story steamy for me, but rather the tension building up to it. The anticipation. The close calls. I think erotic novels do a better job (in my reading experience) of capturing and portraying that tension, which I suppose is why I prefer them. :)

Hi Sassa

Glad you liked the covers!
The Forbidden Shores cover is actually very misleading--it looks like an old-school bodice ripper to me, and OMG, he's wearing a belt!!! In 1800!!! And I used to have a Laurey Ashley outfit just like Ms. Clairol's... The book is nothing like the cover or the back cover blurb.
I do agree about the buildup--but I quite often find the buildup is more satisfying to read and write than the actual bonking, particularly in historicals where you can do so much with gloves and stockings and so on. Ah, fetishists' delight...

Welcome Janet!

What a great blog, and what gorgeous covers!!! I don't read historical, but you certainly got my attention with the Forbidden Shores description -- everything with everyone, huh? Intriguing... ;)

ROTFLMAO on the dripping sandwich... uh, put that down, honey -- a dripping sandwich can't be good... LOL

Anyway, I have read, as probably most everyone has, explicit sex that is not in the least sexy. It's mechanics, unless there is emotion and motivation behind it, something that gives it some intensity or meaning (just like in real life, I suppose).

This is relevant for me at the moment, as I feel like I am traversing the range, as well - I have two WIPS, one that has no sex, one that has moderate explicit sex (Blaze), and one I'm thinking about that would be much more explicit than Blaze.

A lot of non-explicit things can be hot -- the way a guy looks at a woman, the things he says, the intentions he has, even if he never acts on them. But it's a fine line, that one between "oh man, that was so hot and they didn't even do anything" and "man, that was frustrating/disappointing." LOL

Then again, two characters getting down and dirty and really exploring fantasy and spelling things out in no uncertain terms can set the pages on fire. :)

Sometimes I think the hottest love scenes I've read were in books that weren't romances, because to some extent, the focus was elsewhere, and then bam, the characters go at it (thinking of mysteries, mainly. Charlaine Harris comes to mind, specifically).

Fun topic -- thanks for being here. :)

Sam

Sometimes I think the

Sometimes I think the hottest love scenes I've read were in books that weren't romances, because to some extent, the focus was elsewhere
Ain't that the truth, Sam! Try Ian McEwan, for instance. I love it when desire comes out of nowhere and sweeps the characters away.

Hi, Janet! Welcome to

Hi, Janet! Welcome to Cigars! ;)

Ahhhhh...hotness.

I'm of the mindset that it's not just the words that make a scene hot, it's the emotion. And you can absolutely have a super hot, super steamy, super erotic story in which nobody actually has sex! Some of the sexiest moments come from anticipation!

The book I'm editing now (for Spice) struggled with that -- it deals with the eroticism of power and I really didn't think there would be any sex in it at all. IN FACT -- two of the characters who are interacting sexually never actually even kiss! I'm not sure I can pull it off, though...that's why it's still in edits. :)

I'm thinking the market now is becoming saturated with "OMG WE MUST BE KINKY" stories that are kinky for the sake of kink, and I don't like to see that. Everything should have a purpose. Letting your freak flag fly can be freeing (whoa, talk about the F word!) but it's not necessarily NECESSARY!

M

Janet Your books both sound

Janet

Your books both sound amazing. I'll definitely be picking them up. For me, I think my very favorite reads combine both... make me hotly anticipate the sex scenes with lots of intense awareness, and then deliver on a sexy sensual explicit scene when it eventually comes.

Thanks, Maureen!

Thanks, Maureen!

What's Hot

Hi Janet,

Great post and topic. Love you and loved Forbidden Shores! So hot. I hope to read and win Rules of Gentility. I think what makes a book hot is the art of the chase. Language plays and big part of it and it doesn't have to be explicit. Sometimes it can take you right out of the moment. It's all in the tone and how you play with the words and how the characters play with each other.

Best,
Kwana

Hello Kwana (kiss kiss)--so

Hello Kwana (kiss kiss)--so glad to hear your comment about language, because I think that's key; and it's all about the characters, too. Is everyone in every situation going to be at it like a bunny? No. But they may think about it a lot, and to me that's a lot of the fun, and the challenge.

It's what's going on in the minds...

of the characters that's hottest for me, rather than what's happening to their genitals. Don't get me wrong, I love a super hot explicit story as much as the next reader, but I've always been more excited by the mental and emotional game that lovers and others play, rather than a detailed account of their plumbing. :)

In fact, I often enjoy reading or writing the preliminaries in an erotic scene, the dance of power exchange and seduction, than the actual wham bang thank you ma'am finale.

Fantastic post, Janet!

Ps... Megan...

Loved this...

"I'm thinking the market now is becoming saturated with "OMG WE MUST BE KINKY" stories that are kinky for the sake of kink, and I don't like to see that."

and

"it deals with the eroticism of power"...

Sounds like my kind of read! :)

In fact, I often enjoy

In fact, I often enjoy reading or writing the preliminaries in an erotic scene, the dance of power exchange and seduction, than the actual wham bang thank you ma'am finale.

Me too, Portia (hi!). I wonder whether this has anything to do with the latest scientific discovery that women's brains do absolutely nothing at the time of orgasm? (Possibly why we crave it so much...god knows we deserve a break now and again.)

By the time tab A is inserted into slot B (I'm a visitor here, I have to be polite) we all know what's happening, whereas getting there can happen in infinite, wonderful ways.

Forbidden Shores has one gorgeous cover!

It's true, trying to define erotic romance is a losing battle. Sexual tension is key to making a romance smoke and sizzle, and it's hard to keep building tension and conflict in erotic scenes instead of diffusing it, but when it works...yum!

One of my standout examples of heat without any explicit action at all is from The Devil's Delilah by Loretta Chase. It's a "sweet" Regency, but wow, is there a lot of sizzle in the looks, the kiss in the garden...it's the conflict and tension and the chemistry between the characters that makes it so hot.

Thanks...

...but it's much, much ruder than you'd think!

To my embarrassment I haven't yet read Loretta Chase--maybe as (yet another) reward when I've finished writing the current book!

Welcome to Cigars, Janet! I

Welcome to Cigars, Janet! I love your covers...absolutely luscious! Now I have to pick them both up, because they sound fabulous!

I recall reading an historical where the hottest scene in the book was the hero checking the heroine for injuries after she took a tumble from her horse. It was hawt! And they never even kissed...at least not then.

Interesting question

I used to think I was all about the graphic but I read one of Loretta Chase's books (sorry, can't think of the title) and the hero removed her glove (only her glove) and I think I almost climaxed.

The romantic and sexual tension in the removal of her glove was as erotic as anything else I'd ever read.

So, done the right way, I think both the graphic and the not graphic at all can be equally satisfying.

Now, I'm not talking about those old Betty Neels (admit it, how many of you just sighed happily at the mention of her name?) where they kiss and declare their love and intention to get married on the next to last page of the book.

There's got to be some sexual conflict between them before then. But I can also stop at the bedroom door, if need be.

ani

Oh, Lord of Scoundrels!

Love that book. I'm not sure what I love more, the scene where he takes off her glove, or the scene where she shoots him. Fabulous.

Me too!

I love that book too! I only read it fairly recently, but the quality of characterisation and subtle sensuality and rich emotion just blew me away.

Great post!

Janet, I'm tickled by your example of less-explicit language. I am usually more drawn to the not-so-explicit, and I'd love to see how you handled that challenge in RULES OF GENTILITY ... but I gotta admit, that was a powerfully funny illustration.

For me, what makes a book hot is the emotional attraction between the characters. The hawt erotic portions are just icing on the already very tasty cake.

REGENCY BONDAGE? Girl. I *like* you.

-- Rachel

I think both the graphic and

I think both the graphic and the not graphic at all can be equally satisfying. I truly agree with you about that book where there was no mention of sex and yet it was sexual; perhaps a look between the two, a slight caress of the cheek, etc. It's how well the author has played on the actions of the characters.

Oh. My. God!

I have GOT to read Lord of Scoundrels now!

Rachel, Rules was written by accident--I started writing a spoof of Bridget Jones' Diary in the Regency and it started taking itself seriously. One reason there isn't much/any bonking is the characters I chose, although the heroine is certainly turned on by the hero even if she's lacking in experience/vocabulary!

Yes, Regency bondage. I wasn't writing a trad--I was just writing what I wanted to write, something I've been lucky to get away with for three books. When NAL/Signet made me the offer, I told them the sex had to stay, thinking it was a deal-breaker that I'd regret for the rest of my days, but the editor just said "okay" and that was it.

Hello Janet! So far you're

Hello Janet! So far you're three for three in my book. Each of your book has a different degree of 'hotness' in them and I love that. Just because 'Gentility' didn't have anything explicit in it didn't mean, for me, that it wasn't hot.

I am a huge fan of traditional Regencies (and still mourn their demise) and some of them were really 'HAWT' without nary an inch of flesh showing. I felt I needed a cigarette after reading some scenes. That is true talent in my book.

I am still exploring the erotica portion of the romance genre and have found that not everyone gets it right. Yes, they have the right names and really, really let you in on the activity but it falls flat. It's a case of too much sex and not enough story which can be boring, IMHO.

Nice digs you have here Cigar ladies!

Aw, thanks, Santa!

nice to see you here--I haven't read a whole lot of erotic romance myself to be quite honest--our friend Portia here is amazing (she is SUCH a rude girl), and for fairly hard core stuff, try Molly Weatherfield (who is really Pam Rosenthal)--not romance, but funny and sexy and literate.

For doing rather than reading I really recommend Susie Bright's "How to Write a Dirty Story"--she's not very romance-friendly but has some great advice. And also, at RWA National, Pam Rosenthal and I are doing our workshop Pam & Janet Evening--no, really, it's called Writing the Hot Historical. Unfortunately, it's early on Saturday morning after party night, but if we can get up for it (and we'd better), so can you. Oh, and I show overheads of naked men.

I agree--this is such a cool site, and I'm thrilled to be here (oops, I don't think I said that before).

Naked men early on a

Naked men early on a Saturday morning - count me in even if they are on overheads!

Aw, thanks, Janet! :) I'm

Aw, thanks, Janet! :)

I'm not a historical author [although I keep wondering about it...] but the thought of overheads of naked men at your RWA session is very tempting. ;)

Good Question

I don't think a books has to be full of sex to be a hot book. I think it is all and the way the book is written. I have read books that where about straight sex and I didn't think they were hot at all.

Emotion

Welcome Janet,
I think what makes a book hot is the chemistry and feeling between the characters. An erotic scene can be flat if there's no emotion in the act or between the lovers.

Hmm...

Hi, Janet!

I agree with a lot of the other commenters--it isn't necessarily explicitness that makes a book hot. Sometimes being too graphic is actually pretty NOT hot. I do think a lot of what's hot is the tension and build-up, and finding out what the characters are thinking and feeling. And then just removing a glove can be climactic, indeed :)

I need to read about the sex

I don't need to read about the sex for it to be a 'hot' book. The tension leading up to the act (even if it isn't written into the story) is good enough.

Catching up

hi to all of you who posted while I left work, got on the wrong train, fell asleep, finally got home and attended to pressing domestic trivia...and so on--lead bottom (I don't even want to ask how you got that name. Well, actually I do--desperately), Jane, Fedora, Estella, and Buddy.

Sexy Language

There's clearly a buzz from the forbidden words, and I think it's BECAUSE they're forbidden: student sex therapists have to say a word out loud to themselves until it loses its charge (a friend of mine reapeated "wanker" some hundreds of times).

But even getting beyond the specific words, language sexy anyway. Active vs passive voice, and how about the rhetorical tropes -- metonymy, for example, where the part stands for the whole or the whole for the part? Not to speak of those slips of the tongue...

Of course, you've got to do it right.

But then, you always do.

About forbidden words--

Hi, Pam--nice to see you here!

I must admit that the first time I wrote paint (if you know what I mean and I think you do, I'm on best behavior here) it gave me a tremendous feeling of liberation; and it was actually fairly recent. It was in a manuscript, by the way, I don't mean to imply that I was misbehaving in a ladies' room with a felt-tip pen.

English is such a wonderful language for all sorts of shades and subtleties of meaning, and I love to play around with words and imagery. And just as Pam's friend had to inoculate herself against dirty words I think it's possible to wear out words and phrases with overuse. Unfortunately I think it happens a lot in romance--I can hear Pam groaning as I cue my rant against the pebbled nub--but I'll spare you (particularly as I have to go and write). I will however give the rant in full in SF.

And Pam--you always get it right too.

And our winner...

I've been asked by Samantha Hunter to announce the winner she's chosen--just to show that I'm unbiased--

it's

Kwana!

Congrats, and a big thank you to the Ladies of the Exploding Cigar for inviting me, and to everyone who dropped in to chat. It's been a lot of fun!

Woo Hoo!!

Congratulations Kwana!! Let us know which book you pick!

I think that "hot" does come

I think that "hot" does come from the sexual situations that the couples encounter. Sexual tension doesn't make the book hot although it can lead to it. :)

What is sexy

I think "sexy" is what leads up to the actual act. The quick glance, the accidental touch, the first kiss. I don't think graphic sex scenes make a novel sexy. I don't think you need to be explicit about it at all. Some of the sexiest scenes in movies are ones where the characters are still fully clothed. What makes them sexy is the way the characters interact with one another. Pride and Prejudice is a good example. No graphic scenes. But every look, every smile, every gesture telegraph to the audience Darcy and Elizabeth's burgeoning feelings for one another so that, by the time you finally get to the culmination, you're not disappointed that it's only a kiss. It's the way that he kissed her that is so stirring. Is there anybody who watched that movie and didn't wish that someone would kiss them like that? I've had the same reaction to books that would be considered tame by today's standard.

Hi Margay--there's also a

Hi Margay--there's also a lot of hidden sexiness in Mansfield Park--the book, not any of the inadequate movie versions.
I thought the most remarkable part of the Knightley/McFadyen P&P was the first proposal scene in the rain--you weren't sure whether they were going to kill each other or jump each other. And OMG, the rising sun coming between them as they kissed...didn't like the movie much otherwise, tho!

Hi Janet

I think what makes a book hot is the chemistry between the hero and heroine and if that chemistry leads to complete intimacy between the two characters.

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